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PostSubject: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:34 am

Im kinda sad, and i wrote this lol. I usually dont do this but...

The thing I could salvage,but now its too late,
my love and compassion,turned anger and hate.
But when they dont listen,how could she be mine?
A train wreck I could stop, but Im out of time.
As I slowly realize this, you fade from the view.
The only thing I had my eyes on was you.
Now that you left, I feel so trashed and scattered.
I begin to fall, because you're all that mattered.
But then I woke up, now Im stuck in the fray.
I can't stop telling myself, there's another way.
You pass by, and my heart skips a beat.
The only thing on my mind, is what it couldn't be...

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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:35 am

I for one like it....Yay for poetry! (don't ask)
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:42 am

lol I like poetry too XD Here's one I had to write in class, it's not my best though:

As I wiped the window clean of mist,
My hand felt strangely like gentle schist.
Whio is that?
Is that a bat?
Never have I seen this thing,
It does just want to make me sing,
The figure is smiling, ever so slightly,
They seem so strong and mighty.
I never knew who this could be,
But now I realize that it is me.

Truly, the cheesiest I've ever written silent
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:44 am

Not bad No.l...Though you're right Cheezy!
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:45 am

not bad, im just really glad people are getting involved ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:46 am

I know! Mad I need to find my poetry book...I had so many good ones XD This was written in class, and as you can see...I was not into it. ^^;
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:49 am

There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind.

Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black
And the dark street winds and bends.
Past the pits where the asphalt flowers grow
We shall walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And watch where the chalk-white arrows go
To the place where the sidewalk ends.

Yes we'll walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And we'll go where the chalk-white arrows go,
For the children, they mark, and the children, they know
The place where the sidewalk ends.

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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:50 am

i have one:

the sun

The sun kisses the earths ground and sends it to heavan
The sun fight's the night sky to the very end but never wins
The sun loves and learns from all of the mistakes it has made
The sun hugs the moonlight helping it to shine in in the night sky

The sun is love
The sun is everything
The sun is us

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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:53 am

Pretty good, but is this a freelance poem? I didn't see any rhyme scheme.
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:55 am

yeah its just a freelance, but it is still pretty cool, check out yum moons poem it is just abouve mine it is really good, unless he got it from the internet lol

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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:57 am

@ Yum I love Shel Silverstien!
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 2:58 am

lol people would fight over his books at my elementary school library XD

I really like Robert Frost too...
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri May 07, 2010 4:05 am

That happened at my school too. He's a great author.
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Sat May 08, 2010 1:42 am

lol mine too ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Sat May 08, 2010 1:46 am

Is there anyone who doesn't like him?
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PostSubject: Re: Raits A Beast At Poetry!   Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:30 pm

@Squire:
Probably not, his poems are really good.

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