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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Fri May 21, 2010 1:27 am

1st - I was just thinking about when it rained. Usually, people try not to get wet, so they "scatter". The bullets symbolize how rain falls =P And I was thinking of how I appreciate the rain, so I'm getting soaked because I want to enjoy it (if that makes sense ^^Wink

2nd - Since it's going to be summer soon, I thought I'd write about it. Also, the cicadas buzz really loudly (all the time @_@) so I put that in there. I was remembering the time where me and my friend sat outside talking. and since I live in the desert, we were thirsty, so....yeah xD

3rd - A staring contest at school (or lunch, home, etc.)
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Fri May 21, 2010 1:35 am

oh. Okay....then in that case you did a great job!Smile
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Fri May 21, 2010 5:20 am

yep you did a great job ^^

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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Wed Aug 11, 2010 1:10 am

I hate strongly dislike writer's block

Here's something I typed up a few minutes ago:

Carnival

The Carnival's here,
In the summer sun,
Children cheer,
Cause it's time for fun!

No more homework,
No more learning,
Time's a wastin'
Hurry up let's go!

Up and down,
Side to side,
Don't you frown
Enjoy this ride!

The moon is in the air,
Sadly, so soon,
Grabbing my bear,
I sing a tune.

Driving away,
Lights in the distance,
The Carnival stands,
A lonely beacon.

(Inspired from the best movie this Summer: Despicable Me )
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:07 am

its pretty cool, but would it be possible for you to get multi-syllable rhymes in there? itd make it better Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:11 am

I could try Very Happy What format are you thinking of, if I may ask?

A
B
C
D

or

A
A
B
B
C
C
D
D


Stuff like this?
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:29 am

uuuhm, no, i dont think so
i just mean multi syllable rhymes, such as:

"It's torturous/
You must, be a sorceress"
"My pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin/
A zany acting maniac in action/
A brainiac/
in fact son, you mainly lack attraction"

See what I mean? A lot of those are several syllables, or several words come together to form a chain of rhymes. Those are all by Eminem by the way
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:35 am

So, kinda like a lyrical poem?
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:03 am

well, sure
but i mean, u can still do ur A, B, C, D dealio, but make ur rhymes more complex Smile
i dunno, i just think itd be cool
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:16 pm

Haha, ok then Very Happy When I first started writing it, it was turning into a lyrical poem - but I changed it for some reason Razz

I'll edit it sometime soon - thanks for the input! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: No.L's Notebook   Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:40 pm

no problem! Smile
i didnt realize there is a name for that. i suppose i like lyrical poems a lot more. they seem much more complex. i feel anyone could make a poem, but not everyone can make a good lyrical poem Smile
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