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PostSubject: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:31 am

I made this one in a class I was taking a while ago. Obviously its a thanks giving poem.
Plus its my first so excuse the mistakes.


Not as stupid as many think,
turkeys hardly ever blink
when watching hunters by the ton,
cause getting stuffed is not fun.

They know our guns aren't filled with corks,
and they don't like getting stabbed with forks.
They know it happens every year,
so they hide when hunters get near. <--- ( I think i could have done better with that one )

All turkeys get very cautious.
Thinking of it of it makes them nauseous.
From the turkeys you will hear:
RUN! thanksgivings getting near!

lol.
sooo what do you think?
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:32 am

lol nice poem that is really good ^^ Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:38 am

LOLROFLTURKEYS
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:45 am

That was great. Instead of "so they hide when hunters get near" you could say "so they hide in fear" or even "so they disappear!"
But really I nice poem.
Why turkeys though??
I know thankgiving, but what about pilgrims??
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:47 am

LMFAO lol that is a good poem really cheezy though ^^

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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:55 am

Well I like the fact that turkeys know that their time comes on thanksgiving. You would panic to if you had a bunch of maniac killers hunting you down once a year. ROFL


And thanks! it hit the Cheezy target now I am happy : D. Ooooo, possibly should be an award Lol
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 1:56 am

Cheezy, but pretty funny!

The cheeziest poem on pokeplanet. Nice award!
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 4:27 am

lol It's not cheesy ^_^ Mine's is! T_T

I really liked it ^_^ Very unique concept lol I never would have thought to write about Thanksgiving either =P I like your rhyme scheme too, keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Sun May 09, 2010 4:29 am

Will the next one be christmas, Hanuka, or something else?
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PostSubject: Re: Teh poem of turkeys!   Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:00 am

Crank, I just looked this up
and I really liked your rhymes! They were good! Smile
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